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Old Fox 004: a little tear goes trickling by...

Thursday, July 26, 2012

a little tear goes trickling by...



slowly slowly the drops form
sometimes salty but always warm
a little red flashes at times
once you miss it, once it dies!

mindless, ceaseless, raining drops
trickling, rushing, hiding drops
drop by drop maketh a puddle -
liquid pain anchored in a muddle

years of anguish and some despair
all tucked within the beautiful pair
each has a tale tied by a string,
like beaded pearls hanging on a ring

sometimes silent, sometimes playful
a little nudgy, a little hopeful
a little tear goes trickling by
finding no foe, no friends nearby...

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8 Comments:

At July 27, 2012 at 8:20 PM , Blogger Jack said...

Oldfox,

Splendid is the only word which comes in my mind.

Take care

 
At July 30, 2012 at 9:44 PM , Blogger der Bergwind said...

words worth! love the last line especially.

 
At August 3, 2012 at 3:01 PM , Blogger Nikita Banerjee Bhagat said...

Loved it...not saying anything more. Not required.

 
At August 8, 2012 at 10:38 PM , Blogger Oldfox004 said...

Jack Uncle
thank you so much...:)

der Bergwind
thanks! good to see you again:)

Nikita
thank you yaar! nice to see you here:)

 
At September 6, 2012 at 12:25 AM , OpenID deadpoet said...

She bore the pains of unshed tears umpteen,
each that inward lay; afar from the seen.
A solitary soul by lively facets veiled,
beauty such; to only fortunate hearts revealed.


What you wrote was heartfelt :)


Regards,
Dead Poet.

 
At September 9, 2012 at 9:24 PM , Blogger Oldfox004 said...

deadpoet

Thank you so much for sharing this...you are very much a 'lively poet' I must say!

 
At September 29, 2012 at 9:19 PM , Blogger louvalie said...

UNCERTAIN DRAMA

In a world of uncertainty,
In this age of calamity;
How do we find our way,
And walk towards unity?

So some drama let's really raise,
Here is really what I want to say:
Tears will roll without control,
This perhaps is the only way!...

I wish to bathe in the sun daily,
Srimad-Bhagavatam certainly!
The very best let's not dismiss,
How else are we to find peace?

So to end this here let's pray:
May we cry and laugh today,
Unload/download all that weight,
And be ourselves in full display!...

Kirtan
29 September 2012

 
At September 30, 2012 at 12:56 PM , Blogger Oldfox004 said...

Wow! This is beautiful...Can you please tell me where can I find more such reads?

The flow is beautiful and loved the ending stanza..yes, lets just get rid of all the burden and cry and laugh and be ourselves!

Soothingly beautiful poetry if i can say that..actually it can be a beautiful song sung in some regional language?!

 

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