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Old Fox 004: The little Big Fight

Wednesday, July 20, 2011

The little Big Fight



it creeps up on me
as slimy as ever,
i writhe in its touch
entangled in its gossamer,
then it pops up a question:
"when will you, my dear?"

i jostle around
in my wonderland surreal,
juggling the question
not believing i'm in peril
i pretend to have not heard -
the omen that is now so real

the writing is etched on the wall
its naked elements exposed
i give it one last shot
perhaps it is all I've got
alas! the will is lost in vain...
and my conscience wins again!



P.S: every morning my conscience teases me - wake up at 6, huh?

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9 Comments:

At July 20, 2011 at 8:43 PM , Blogger Alka Gurha said...

Beautiful weave...so did you succumb to your conscience or to indulgence?

 
At July 20, 2011 at 11:46 PM , Blogger Oldfox004 said...

Alka
hehe...its a new story every morning:D

 
At July 21, 2011 at 12:38 AM , Blogger sawan said...

:) everything inspires u to write, aint it? :P

 
At July 21, 2011 at 9:36 AM , Blogger Purba said...

Conscience is almost like our Mom - niggling, nagging. Want her to shutup yet can't live a minute without her.

 
At July 21, 2011 at 2:42 PM , Blogger Mads said...

lol...this was very very creative! u write so so well! man..i missed ur blog! glad to see u blogging so regularly =)

 
At July 21, 2011 at 9:11 PM , Blogger Oldfox004 said...

Sawan
bingo!

Purba
hehe..i like the analogy!

Mads
*bloats up :D
glad to have u read me, Mads!

 
At July 31, 2011 at 11:27 PM , Blogger kanagu said...

LOL!!!! For once I understood the meaning of this poem :)

Keep them coming Vins :D :D

 
At August 6, 2011 at 10:03 PM , Blogger Jack said...

Oldfox,

Thank God, your conscience wins. LOL.

Take care

 
At September 9, 2011 at 4:44 PM , Blogger Oldfox004 said...

Kanagu
LOLsss..and thank heavens for that!!

Jack Uncle
its a tricky thing every morning!

 

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